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THIS IS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT
You now have the melody in the song
And the beat at the beginning really
Catches my attention

I really hope to see more of this style in the future

Maybe put a low pass on the bass
Also make the song longer If you can

Equanitom responds:

I did this just because you said I don't have much melodies in my songs, that really struck my heart :'( jk xD I will not make it longer cause it's a loop!

HAHA FINALLY
I found someone who has a chance at beating me
in the contest

You my friend are a major threat to pretty much everyone in the contest

you make want to try
Great job on this song too
I hope you can make it to the final round

bolisa responds:

Haha! Thanks mate :))

Bass wise amazing job

But the last 1 minute 50 seconds was the part that grasped my attention
Don't get me wrong you did good
But the melody really kicked in at the last 40 seconds
The ending sounds like a beginning to me that I would make
Grasp the persons attention at the start
Then you're able to keep that persons attention
Like I said that last 1m 50s was really the only thing that got my attention
And I stayed even though you have the beat calm down

Start off with a catchy beat followed by a great melody
And that's how you're able to get more people to look at your music
Hey that's how I do things

Actually i liked the intro

the intro felt like something was coming after you

EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT IN THIS SONG
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT

Bravo
Sounds amazing

I gotta say i am very
impressed with how you made this

one thing that i dont like (which a few people pointed out)
is the supersaw (it sounds like) at the end that randomly played
i am fine with it
but maybe making it where its volume rises
just so it doesnt feel so random
but hey thats not somthing that will destroy your score
i give it a 4.5

excellence

Domyeah responds:

Thanks :D

Nice job

Try changing the entire beat
promise me that
look at my channel to see what i mean

Sounds a lot like your other song
But it still is awesome

BRAVO

I like it
if you can support newgrounds with
at least one more great track like this
i will scout you
Promise

I like this song you did a great job on this
keep it up bro

Musician, Artist, Voice Acter, Game Designer. Thats all you need to know about me

Age 24, Male

Glen Este

Cincinnati,Ohio

Joined on 2/19/15

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